Serial: Original Song

[Cougar Bait]

She wore a satin scarf
When I found her
I think I left my mark
By the water
And time ticks on by
Like a train
She said she always liked the rain

Rest stops they all look the same
Not to a man bent on you
I find you
You turn me away

Somewhere on 65
Is where I found her
She's not the same no more
i have changed her
Hands wash more hands
Like a dream
Now she can rest
She is clean

re: chorus

I needed some time alone
You found me, you found me
I wanted some time alone
You found me, you found me

re: chorus

 

[Fu Manchu]

cougar bait you should to some rap

 

[Cougar Bait]

Yeah so I can look MORE ridiculous?

 

[Fu Manchu]

yes

 

[Ike Mana]

Nice effort Cougar. You rocked that shit!

 

[Polaroid]

That wasn't bad. But since I can neither sing nor write music nor play an instrument it was actually pretty awesome.

Another vote for some rap, though.

 

[Cougar Bait]

Damn it.

I wouldn't know a rap if it hit me in the fuckin head.

What about a yodel?

 

[Polaroid]

OK, what about rap with some Auto Tune? That would be awesome, do a T-Pain.

 

[Cougar Bait]

Yeah but I hate auto tune so much I'd probably vomit.

Now that's a video.

 

[Polaroid]

Isn't there an iPhone Auto Tune app? Although it's really lame, T-Pain makes it awesome.

 

[xpansive]

Yeah but I hate auto tune so much I'd probably vomit.

Now that's a video.

 

[batemanpatrickl]

Great job Cougay!

 

[Cougar Bait]

Great job Cougay!

Thanks guys

 

[Mudcat]

GOOD TUNE

 

[MrMonkey]

Damn it.

I wouldn't know a rap if it hit me in the fuckin head.

What about a yodel?

CB, do a quick rap each day with your bases picks? Big ratings over there I imagine and you might be paid 25 points a day to do it? You might even be kind to share the vid with your loser friends over here?

Can't be any scarier than sticking your dick into some of those broads your doing? It that how you get all those old broads, by serenading them with sweet music?

 

[kato]

good shit kid...

the future though is zamfir

 

[Rubyn]

Nice job, Cougarbaitballs!

I'm a singer, so I am going to give you some vocal/phrasing tips.

Try to refrain from turning a 1 syllable word into a 2 syllable word. This happens toward the end of a phrase, typically when you are changing notes (ra-hain, wa-hay, dre-heam).

You also push your voice a little hard toward the end of some phrases, which causes intonation issues. When you are holding anything longer than a half note, try raising your eyebrows a little. This will help the note from going flat.

Post more songs. I like when you and Muddy do that!

 

[roguejuror]

robyn do you have a trained ear?